Patch Notes - Log 1 + Log 2
So this was an interesting start to editing Thrust Vector. Overall, I've come to the conclusion that most of the first chapters were pretty crap, with only the later few actually capturing the tone I wanted from the story. To be positive however, it is much easier rewriting if you already know what is going on with the story!
- Added new chapter “Promises”
- Introduction of Lieutenant Alek Markov and the Field streamlined
- Now it’s own standalone chapter
Log 2: Earth - Rewrite
- Standalone Chapter
- Streamlined introduction of Vector Corps
- Changed introduction
- Description of Ledenoft changed to better fit themes
- Added Cmdr. Dalsma and Lt. Markov armored car conversation
- Lt. Markov changes
- Increased recognizably
- Added more sarcastic and tired personality
- Markov now carries around his Consortium Star on him
- More detail on how he earned the Star
- Cmdr. Dalsma changes
- Changed from Lieutenant to Commander rank
- Changed for him to be known as a retired pilot from the start
- Added a sense of awe towards Markov
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